00:40, 1:35, 3:10 we’re all great parts (the parts that came right after, i mean)

the section at 2:52, i would have taken out one of the beats (or noises or whatever the proper termonology is) because it gets too busy and then you add another one in a little later

thought the ending was pretty good although i didn’t really like how it got quieter, but the part right before that was awesome

all in all, fairly well done, good job!